13G1H's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Track One_RR]

I like it!

First off let me start by thanking you for your review on one of my submissions. Although it wasn't one of our good songs, you still appreciated the work we put in so thank you. Now, back to your song, I like it alot. It gives off a very distinct "rave" feeling and the sounds of an audience only enhances the feeling. My only critisim would be that it isnt really a full techno song (which is fine because you mentioned that it is a demo). Most techno is pretty long though, i'd say at least 4 and a half minutes or more per song. But this is really good, the beat keeps you interested while never really getting to the point of complete boredom. I'd say ou have talent, however don't stop with this. Keep going, it is evident that you can get alot better.

oh and if you enjoyed my song, maybe you would enjoy the others we submitted. They are alot better then Carnivalivore. Look for The Crow Is The Answer and Jihad Soundz, and tell me whatcha think! we love the feedback!

oh and also, you can add us on mspace if you have one, at www.myspace.com/thirteenguysandahorse
we are just a bunch of guys who love techno and have free time, so if you like us then send us a comment or something!

peace & respect-
13g1h

RenoakRhythm responds:

Hey, you're welcome for that review. I will be checking out your other stuff later for sure.

Yes, this is definitely just the first two or so minutes of a longer song that does get harder.

I don't have a myspace. But i'll look into it.

I really only added the crowd to this song because its strongly a club song and club songs really sound better at the club, so hopefully the crowd wasn't too cheesy, i spent time making sound sound like a real crowd at a club rather than putting a cheesy sample in the background.

I think I'll upload the full version this next weekend then. I'll give this sometime to get reviews, so maybe I'll change the full version if I get some really good ideas or some critism that points out something i missed.